2) I was not given much feedback on anything to work on. I was given one piece of feedback from Ben complimenting how he liked how I added his along with Esteban's feedback into it.
3) In my 3rd pitch, I really wanted to work on being able to memorize it and be more comfortable with it. I tend that sometimes when I begin to panic, I speed my pace up and it can sometimes be longer than 1 minute. I also have been trying to become more comfortable in front of the camera which I think I have been doing a lot better with.
Billy I think this elevator pitch was your best one yet. I think by focusing on your strong points of your pitch and practicing memorizing your pitch you gained a lot of confidence in your pitch. Going forward in your elevator pitches I think you should continue to speak loudly and confidently and continue to practice showing enthusiasm in your pitches
ReplyDeleteI agree with the commentor above when he says that this was your best pitch yet. I do not believe that I have commented on one of your pitches before, so I went back and watched all of them. I think that you were very well versed not only on your background but exactly the message that you wanted to portray. With additional practice, you should be able to give this pitch in your sleep backwards very soon! Good job!
ReplyDeleteHey, nicely done one your third iteration of your pitch. I think your skills in presenting your venture concept have improved to the point you can succinctly, effectively, and enthusiastically deliver your idea to a venture capitalist, a group, or a class. This will help you with the next assignment greatly. I’ve enjoyed seeing your pitches improve through the semester.
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