2) What stood out to me to be really important was the feedback that was given to me. Ben had thought that I did a great job explaining the problems of the current situation along with the benefits that it would bring. This had given me more confidence on my idea knowing that more people thought it was a good idea. I also thought the feedback from Ben was really interesting because it gave me more outlook on my idea and how I can better express myself. Esteban gave me a good outlook on structuring my pitch down more and spend more time on stating why the product matters.
3) Based off of my feedback, I took advice from both of my classmates. I went over who we are as a company and how I would be making money, how I would be hired by the stadium, and how we would be producing the tablets ourselves. I also structured the pitch down more so that the customers are able to see why the product matters more.
Billy I think you did a great job improving your elevator pitch and I believe this pitch came out great. I like how you took my advice to improve your pitch and emphasize what was good about your former pitch. Additionally, I like how you implemented Esteban's idea to structure your pitch
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